I am a wolf.
Rebellious and courageous.
I snarl at people who disagree with me.
I attack when I feel my territory is being threatened.
Loyal and trustworthy.
I am one with my pack.
Trust in me and I will have your back.
I live my short life to the fullest
I am able to see the light through darkness.
Adventurous and mysterious
My howl is misconceived by most and only truly understood by my pack.
Dominant in my environment
A wolf am I.
I like how you're so confident and arrogant yet it's regal and fitting for you. The words are a little bourgeois, but towards the end the wording really was wowing. The final sentence really emanates and is very solid. Good job, dude.
ReplyDeleteI think how you choose the wolf is so you, I like how you used true to life facts about wolves in your metaphor and also I like how you had ended your poem. GG
ReplyDelete-Tee M. Goda
I like it. A wolf really fits you. It seems like you're the confident yet.... loyal(?) type of person then. You did a good job on comparing yourself to a wolf. Nice one.
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