A'ala
My "Querencia" is A'ala Skate park. It's a place where i can be free. Nobody is stopping me from doing anything here. The feeling of skating around and just having a good time is something indescribable. My mind is clear from all the stress here. My mind is clear here, no stress. Just me and my skateboard.
You should talk about how you feel when you're here. Try to be more descriptive and show a lot of emotion. Also, don't repeat the same wordsin a row. For example, in your paragraph, you said, "My mind is clear from all the stress here. My mind is clear here, no stress." Use different words.
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